sewerghoul's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[AIM - Crystallization]

that fits perfectly!! great job!

[sexy looppp]

good loop, friend!

[[Eroaudio] The Lion & The Mouse [M/M, Mating Cycle/Breeding,Deepthroating,Anal]]

I'm really loving your M/M stuff! It's great! Especially "Level up!"- one of my favorites!
I particularly enjoy less narration and think it's is great for smutty erotica stories. I believe it should be used when something happens that the audience can't hear. Instead, letting the voice actors and sound effects fill in the small blanks. (Instead of a character saying "He climbed onto the bed." some SFX of a bed creak plays. It leaves it up to the listener to figure it out the obvious stuff! Love it!)

As a fan of your work, I'm glad I have the chance to offer some
(hopefully constructive) critique:
Audio mixing- The music in Level up! was at a perfect volume and at a perfect tempo. You could hear it was there, building ambiance, but it didn't distract from the voice acting. Here it is a little distracting. The voice acting is usually really good and it's rare that I hear a bad microphone. I more often hear problems with volume control than I do mic troubles. Here, the mics are a bit mixed in quality and the narrator & mouse were a little "squeaky", which was distracting.

Dialogue- I think the dialogue is generally decent enough, although sometimes I wish it focused more on realism. I sometimes find myself immersed in a person's experience and suddenly I remember that it's an actor reading dialogue. Example: "See, little one? There is no satiating me,". I know that it could be for the sake of this story but I've found it in your other stories as well, where the characters weren't from an online story setting. Word choice is the fine line between an immersive story and background noise.

I hope this was more helpful than it was harsh! I can't wait to hear more of your stuff! Can't find this quality of M/M erotica anywhere else! :0)

Cmakesp responds:

Hi, I really appreciate the feedback. I'm new this and I'm glad to receive any critique to get better. I've uploaded a new version because the music was supposed to be a lot lower (an error occurred during editing). For the rest of your comments, I'll keep them in mind for future projects.

[みんなのA列車で行こうPC]

head bopping!!

[12/01/18]

i don't know how to describe this other than "cool"

[Clown Face Acid]

bouncy

[Circus Clown]

really great melody but i wish the quality was a little higher

[pee pee dog]

absolutely good yeah

[i hate my life]

holy fuck i love this song i will keep it in my heart and my ass forever

[Saxophone doodles]

It's so cute! It's nice and simple, I like that!